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October 28, 2009

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Ole

Since you do touch on the international sphere, a cell phone in many other places is a mobile phone. Or even a 'handy' (in Germany only, but still) :)

Enjoyable column!

Julie

I thought of this post today when @APStylebook posted about this very subject! In a correction of an earlier tweet, @APStylebook stated that smart phone is two words. Here's the link: http://twitter.com/APStylebook/status/5403870193.

It's so interesting to see everyone's take on writing style!

Erik

Regarding capitalization of "iPhone," it seems to me that the "i" should remain as a lowercase letter even if the word starts a sentence. It is the proper name of the product, after all.

Dan

Thanks for your comment, Erik. But iPhone is definitely uppercase when starting a sentence, as is every word in the English language no matter how an individual or company styles its name. A company can choose to style a brand name however it chooses - and that's what Apple does with iPhone - but the rules of grammar are bigger than any one brand or marketing plan.

Eric C

Question. You write that we should only use hyphens--and I agree-- but what about parenthesis around the first trio of digits, ie (xxx) xxx-xxxx.

I like this look better.

Eric C

I don't think my comment went through earlier, but is it okay to write "(xxx) xxx-xxxx" for phone numbers? This is how I usually do it.

mighty red pen

As an editor, I've always followed the rule that the need to capitalize the first word of the sentence trumps brand names like iPod and eBay. However, an even better way to handle it (in my experience) is often to rewrite the sentence to avoid this conundrum.

Dan

Hi, Eric. Sorry for this tardy response! More than anything, I'm a proponent of consistency. So while I prefer hyphens in phone numbers, if you prefer italics around area codes and are consistent about it, it's probably fine. (Though I admit I think using periods is pretentious.)

Jennifer

Dan -- interesting that CP/AP has adopted Blackberrys, since BlackBerry brand guidelines state the plural should always be BlackBerry smartphones (smartphone one word).

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