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May 25, 2007

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Andrew Galbraith

This is a very relevant post for me, as I deal with a lot of press releases that have been translated from Chinese. Chinese-language releases are filled with quotes from bigwigs who are excited about a product or event. It's a cultural issue as much as a linguistic one, and I often find myself leaving the quotes in, despite my own misgivings. Am I right to assume that consistency between translations trumps style?

Dan Santow

I'm not really sure what you're asking - when translating should you change a stupid quote to a smart one? Probably not unless you have made some arrangement in advance. (I'm not familiar enough with the culture in which you work to respond with any definity.)

Andrew Galbraith

Re-reading my question, I'm not entirely sure what I was asking either! It was a long day.

I think the basic issue is that the English translations I deal with are often used for internal approval, and are not widely distributed. There is a temptation in these cases to translate in such a way that the essential meaning of the release is kept, but the style (including use of quotes) conforms to English-language press release norms. Like all translation, it can be a tricky balancing act!

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