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June 21, 2009

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John White

1.
>you’d never write “IBM are going to move into new offices,”

You would write that if you were from the UK.

2. If you're tired of "Summertime and the Livin' is Easy," keep moving through the music catalog:
"Ain't no cure for the Summertime blues"
"We've been having fun all summer long"
"There's danger in the summer moon above"
"switch on summer from a slot machine"
"Summer dreams torn at the seams"
"All that summer we enjoyed it"

Gal Barnea

Why "National Governor's Association"? Is it an association for a single Governor?

My instinct was that the apostrophe was misplaced and that it should be the "National Governors' Association" but a quick visit to their site showed me they prefer not to have an apostrophe at all, which makes your insertion even more egregious.

Dan Santow

John, you're right, of course: I should have made it clear that this rule pertains to U.S. English (as opposed to British English). And I LOVE all your summery suggestions!

Daniel, thank you for your close reading. I've now corrected my "egregious" error. (Ironically -- considering this tip is about referring to single entities properly -- you referred to the National Governors Association correctly as "it" but then incorrectly as "their" and "they"!)

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